The liberation of cats and dogs

27 09 2010

sometimes

we can’t hear the purrs

for all the barking

this is the most brilliant poem I’ve ever written

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4 responses

27 09 2010
poemblaze

Cute, but I hope it isn’t your most brilliant.

27 09 2010
Lily

I have no idea what constitutes brilliance. perhaps what is brilliant to one, is dog food to another. I don’t take poetry very seriously anymore, i used to. It would wake me at night and demand my pen. Now it’s a grain of salt in a very large sea.

2 01 2011
miridunn

I think if the last line is part of the poem then it IS brilliant! and very funny! Happy New Year, Lily

5 01 2011
Lily

Hi Miriclaire, hoping January is being kind for you and yours.
The last line is part of the poem I guess, it just sat itself down there and started preening itself lol

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